Friday, July 18, 2008
You................ updated Version
You....................................
You.. came into my Life one day
Bought colors in my life , that which is gray
You changed my world- turned it upside down
You.. with Your dark black curls & eyes- light brown.
You tought me meaning of the word- joy,
You bought happiness in my life - o boy!
I had waited long, for this moment divine
To be lucky to be entrusted to her,the feminine.
You bought me luck and shared my sorrow
You were there always for me, no worry of t'morrow
You were my umbrella shielding me from the rain
Whilst wid You, i was so happy, You were an antidote to pain.
You were there for me as no 1 else was,dear,
You let me know no grief or pain or fear
You were in me as much as I was in you
Frankly speaking, i was deeply in love with you.
Now I felt you even when you weren't around
In you, a strange joy , my heart found.
U were in my thoughts, swirling in and out
We were deeply connected- there was no doubt.
I was totally lost in you, from so deep within
I knew no difference between virtue or sin.
My heart bubbled full of love so pure.
I would gladly give myself up for you, I'm sure.
U were very precious -U meant the world to me,
With U, every moment, My heart Used to be
Past, present and future we would ceaselessly traverse
Together we went ,both ,forward and reverse.
I trusted U blindly- till no possible end
Ur smile was contagious,on U did I sorely depend.
I was fully immersed in a constant state of Bliss
Forever Ur memory, my heart would kiss.
My heart, used to beat solely for you, transluscent;
For You My life would now be carefully spent
Everything I had was now only & only yours
In my mind and heart I felt continuous tremors.
Time meant nothing for me ;all of it was for You
Spending this renewed life amidst seasons anew
For You my life I would effortlessly sacrifice
You were my life's flavor, sweet & salt & spice.
You were my angel, showering me with sweet love,
with you, my heart used to fly like a pure-white dove
You were My God, I had all my wishes fulfilled
My heart became Pure, all the darkness distilled.
I reminisce everything now, this glorious union
You were very very unique, One in a trillion;
I was lucky as only for me You were made
For You alone, my only Soul I would trade.
The greatest joy in the world is Just to fall in Love,
With your equal :somewhere,someplace,Somehow.
Give your heart, if you must, to someone you feel your own
And treasure their heart as how you would, like your own.
- K. Aravind
17.7.2008
Hello people........... The previous poem reflected on the after effects of a heart break after a serious relationship,,,,, this is the counter.......... The poet describes [in detail] about his perfect half..n her influences in his life.......A Sweet Ending,,,, hope You'll Like It !!!!!
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2 comments:
amazingggg....
I have no words .. !!!
u write so well ..
and the poem really relates to ur life .. very happy for u now, this does not happen to everyone, u're one of the lucky few !! :)
well what can i say am speechless.din knew u r such a gifted writer...way to go ...u nearly gave me a set back..and as far as da poem goes itz just lovely..itz like u wan to read more and more of it and u cant get enuff...way to go arvind..keep blogging and i will keep on posting t.c homie God Bless :)...
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